Citation Verb Alternatives
Bored of “said”?
Choose based on your field (Brexina, 2012)
- Arts Writers
- Most common: pointed out, noted, argued, suggested, stated, observed, explained
- Also used: claimed, said, remarked, maintained, showed, proposed, stressed, mentioned
- Science Writers
- use fewer verbs more often:
- Most common: pointed out, showed
- Also used: argued, emphasized, observed, discussed
Choose based on confidence
- “The author is sure, and I believe them”:
- said, mentioned, observed
- concluded, wrote
- reported, emphasized, pointed
- out, stressed, noted
- illustrated, established
- described, showed, confirmed
- stated, indicated
- demonstrated, found
- “The author is unsure, or I’m not sure about the author”:
- assumed, believed, suggested, maintained, claimed
- argued, reasoned, speculated, implied, posited
- proposed, hypothesized, postulated, contended
- indicated, estimated, asserted
These verbs have more specific meaning:
* Agree: agreed, confirmed
* Disagree: disagreed, rejected, replied, contradicted, responded, questioned, challenged, answered
* Questions: asked, wondered, questioned whether
* Suggestions: suggested, advised, proposed, recommended
* Predictions: predicted, speculated, warned that X will Y
* Admit Problems: admitted, acknowledged * These verbs say what the author did
* highlighted the fact that
* made the case that
* presented evidence that
Common mistakes
- Careful of “that”
- You can use “said that” or “argued that” or “claimed that” or “found that”
- “that” means more or less “って” as in “って言った”
- it’s for quoting ideas and facts
- However, some verbs can break easily
- they prefer an object that isn’t a fact or quote
- avoid “described that” and try “described an experiment”
- avoid “outlined that” and try “outlined a plan”
- avoid “discussed that” and try “discussed the idea”
- avoid “rejected that” and try “rejected the idea”
- Once you’ve made the verb happy, you can then use “that” to give detail
- “described an experiment (that)”
- “outlined a plan (that)”
- “discussed the idea (that)”
- “rejected the idea (that)”
- Don’t use “suggested that” if it’s not a suggestion.
- Don’t use “found that” if it’s not a finding (a research result)
- If it doubt, use “said”
- You can use “said that” or “argued that” or “claimed that” or “found that”
- Careful of verb tense choice
- Is it true, relevant, and recent? Maybe use present (says) or perfect (has said). Maybe!
- Otherwise (and if in doubt) use past (“said”)
- Never use
- Opinion verbs: guessed, thought
- Phrasal verbs: came up with, worked out, found out
- Slang verbs: reckoned, figured