Write a Resume(CV) and Cover Letter
Warmer Discussion
- Are you doing job hunting (part time or full time)?
- What part time jobs have you had?
- What job do you want after you graduate?
- Are you interested in English-speaking jobs or jobs overseas?
- Where do students look for jobs these days?
C.V. or Resume? Which is which?
- Resume: A one page summary. Work first. More for US and business
- CV: A 2-3 page summary. School first. More for UK and academics.
Step 1 - Analyse a CV/Resume structure
Look at the examples
- How are they different?
- What are the sections in each?
- What order is each section in?
- How much information is given
- How are each different from Japanese rirekishou?
Step 2 - write your own
- Feel free to lie or invent if you don’t want to share.
- Maybe imagine who you MIGHT be in 5-10 years and write THAT resume.
If you have no work experience, try these:
- Club/circle/team membership
- Volunteer experience
- Driving license
- Awards (study, sports)
- Sports , Music, Hobbies
- First Aid experience
- What else can you think of?
- WHat words can you use to describe your other experience better? (keen, proficient, qualified, active)
If you have part-time experience
Make your job sound better
Instead of: Waiter, XYZ Ramen, Shinjuku. I took money, took orders, cleaned toilet. Better to say: Serving staff, XYZ Ramen, Shinjuku. Responsible for cash handling, customer service and hygiene inspection.
I… | I was responsible for… |
---|---|
took money | cash handling |
talked to customers | customer service |
wrote signs | publicity |
locked the door | security |
fixed the door | maintenance |
cooked | food preparation |
cleaned (the kitchen) | (food) hygiene |
put up Halloween decorations | décor |
told new staff what to do | staff training |
organised shift swaps | scheduling |
did some paperwork | administration |
filled the shelves | stock control |
giving free stuff away | promotions |
checked something | quality control |
Task 1: Find an advert for a job you want.
- Find an appropriate CV Template
- Some are available to download (but many are not free)
- There are some built into Google
- I will share one in Classroom.
- Fill in the details. Add sections (e.g. for circles) if you need to
- Try to adapt your CV to the job.
- Remember to use your circle roles/part time job work as necessary.
Task 2: Cover letter
- Usually you don’t just send the CV. You send a short letter:
- introducing yourself
- saying how your skills/experience match those asked for in the job advert
- giving any information they asked for which is not on your CV (e.g. interview availability)
- giving any other highlights you really don’t want them to miss
- There are different styles.
- UK cover letters tend to be very short (like the example below)
- US cover letters tend to add more text, about aims/philosophy.
- Make sure you know what style you need and find more examples.
Cover Letter - Suggested structure and useful language
- 1) Top of letter
- YOUR name, address, email address, date (top right)
- THEIR Name, title, address (left aligned
- 2) Start with Formal greeting
- If there is a name, use “Dear X”
- No name?
- Use “To Whom it May Concern” (title case deliberate)
- You could also use “Dear Hiring Committee” or “Dear Recruitment Department” if that’s what they called themselves.
- 3) Greeting paragraph.
- Name yourself and the job (any order)
- “I am writing to apply for the role of X.”
- “I am contacting you in response to the job posting for ROLE”
- “I am a 4th year student at…”
- “I would like to apply for the position of”
- “I am writing in response to the job announcement for ROLE”
- Give where you saw the ad e.g.
- ”, as posted on DATE in SOURCE.”
- “as advertised on SOURCE”
- “posted on your company’s recruitment page.”
- Opening info line
- ” I strongly believe I am a good match for this position because
- “I am applying because I feel that my skills, experience, and qualifications are a good match for the position advertised”
- “I am applying because I am very interested in FIELD due to REASON”
- Describe why you like company + “For these reasons, I am very interested in applying to your company, and below I will explain why I think I would be a good fit.”
- Name yourself and the job (any order)
- 4) Optional more personal paragraph (before or after job advert paragraph, or joined to greeting)
- Why you are interested in this field
- Why you are interested in this company
- Could be:
- people who recommended it
- People you met doing the job who inspired you
- Related past experiences
- 5) Paragraph about job advert. Point by point, in order, say how you meet or almost meet the requirements not covered already. If possible, give examples.
- Start
- “In terms of the requirements in the job interview,
- I would like to explain how my skills qualifications and experience match those advertised. First,…”
- Transition between points
- In terms of
- As for
- In addition
- The posting also mentions X, which
- As regards
- Experience/Skills you have
- “I have extensive experience in”
- “I have a strong background in”
- “I have regularly been asked to”
- While I ….I was responsible for
- At PLACE, I was asked to
- I did X for three months at PLACE
- Experience/Skills you don’t quite have
- “While I am not X, I do have similar/related experience from my time doing X”
- “While I do not have experience doing X, I have spent time doing Y”
- Experience/Skills you don’t have
- While I cannot use X at the moment, …
- While I have never X’d, …
- Although I do not X, …
- … I am very keen to learn
- … I recently started an online course which will be completed by the start date.
- … I have previously learned Y, and I believe the skills would transfer easily.
- Giving details
- “For example”
- “One way in which I used this skill is”
- “Specifically, when I was ROLE, I suggested/improved/implemented improvements”
- Use Adjectives, but not too much
- Start
- 6) Paragraph about anything not asked for, but relevant.
- Driving license?
- Other languages “In addition to the fluency in English requested, I also speak German at an intermediate level.”
- Awards “I won an (award/was awarded) for achieving a high threshold score on an English proficiency exam, only given to around 25 students each year.”
- Hobbies/SportsCircle activities not already used
- Any unfinished courses and qualification not already mentioned (“I am currently working towards a certificate in”)
- 7) Final Paragraph
- enclosures
- “Please find enclosed my CV and scans of my qualifications.”
- “As requested, I have enclosed X, Y and Z”
- Offer more
- If you have any questions about my application, please do not hesitate to contact me.
- Closing
- “I look forward to hearing from you, and to possibly working together in the future.”
- “Thank you in advance for taking the time to read my application”
- enclosures
- 8) Ending
- If you used “To Whom”, end “Yours faithfully,”
- If you used “Dear NAME”, end “Yours sincerely,”
- Note the comma, not period here
- 9) Sign
- Print and Sign it if paper application
- Paste an image of your signature if PDF application
- Type your name.
Cover letter - other tips
- Print the ad as a PDF before you start. If you get an interview and they’ve deleted the advert, you might not remember what requirements they had.
- If electronic application, EXPORT AS A PDF unless they request Word. Not everyone has the same software and it could make things weird, especially tables.
- I aim for (Double spaced), 60-80% of one page
- Avoid spilling over to a second page then stopping after 3 lines
- Avoid half-empty one-page letters
- Avoid saying too much (single spaced 100% of page will not get read)
- If paper
- use good paper and a good envelope.
- fold it neatly
- Spellcheck!
- Spellcheck again!
- Have someone check it for you! Email me if you don’t have a proofreader.
- Spellcheck again!
Example cover letter
Thanks to HS for the original example.
This is JUST THE TEXT. Find and follow a template (Word/Drive) for a standard formal business letter (addresses, alignment, margins, etc).
Dear Ms Smith,
I am a fourth-year Science and Engineering student at X University, and I would like to apply for the position of assistant school manager, as advertised on your website.
I am confident that my university course has prepared me for a career as a English school assistant in terms of language skill – please see the attached TOEIC and TOEFL certificates. Although I do not possess any experience as a manager, I was a trainer for new staff for one year in my part-time job at Toho Cinemas. Working there helped me to learn the importance of dealing with customers in a friendly and efficient way, accurate management of reservations, and handling cash. I believe I can apply the skills obtained in the future.
Should you have any queries regarding my application or require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I would like to thank you in advance for your time and consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Hiromi Suzuki
STYLE: Some useful vocab for CVs and cover letters
- Verbs
- Creative/effective/self-starter
- solved
- suggested
- initiated
- designed
- developed
- established
- team work communication skills / interpersonal skills
- shared
- participated in
- contributed to
- supported
- collaborated
- facilitated
- Leadership
- led
- managed (a project/a team of three)
- trained
- organised
- chaired
- delegated
- motivated
- supervised
- Specific project actions: Creativity / effectiveness
- devised
- handled
- approved
- proactively X’d
- identified
- formulated
- improved
- increased/decreased
- investigated
- wrote
- compiled
- presented
- represented … at
- planning
- anticipated
- arranged
- budgeted for /
- organised
- scheduled
- evaluated
- made + NOUN (suggestions, recommendations)
- Creative/effective/self-starter
- Other patterns
- Sentence Starters
- I was responsible for X
- I assisted in Xing
- I successfully X’d
- I my role as X, I Y’d
- As ROLE, I X’d
- Specific skills (e.g. IT)
- proficient in/with
- good command of
- working knowledge of
- Sentence Starters
- Adjectives
- in-depth
- successful
- substantial
- Adverbs
- successfully
- completely
- currently
- As with all formal writing, AVOID
- PHRASAL VERBS - they’re too casual
- ~come up with~
- ~look after~
- ~take over~
- CASUAL words
- boss (manager)
- job (position, post)
- ad (posting, advertisement)
- Abbreviations
- can’t -> cannot
- haven’t -> havenot
- Missed Conditionsals
- I want to -> I would like to
- I can send -> I could send
- PHRASAL VERBS - they’re too casual