Alba English

Materials for Class

Avoid short sentences

Too many short sentences is bad.

Bad Example

The second criterion is having a clear goal. Organisations should clearly say what they do. They should say why inviting volunteers is necessary. For example, goals could be ending hunger. This can be check on their website. It should have a list of goals. In summary it is possible to find a good volunteer organisation.

Minimum and targets

Exceptions

Topic and keyword sentences can be short (although it’s better if they’re not).

Solution and Fixed Example

The second criterion is having a clear goal. Organisations should clearly say what they do, and should say why inviting volunteers is necessary. For example, goals could be ending hunger, which can be checked on their website, which should have a list of goals. In summary it is possible to find a good volunteer organisation by carefully choosing criteria and then searching for evidence that the organisation meets them.